Keep up the great work!
At least you kept it brief.
Good animation but it has horrible sound quality and its too short.
No good jokes.
Gets boring really fast.
The music is mostly good but doesn´t fit the game.
The beginning was cool but there seemed to be a little bit more delay in the right ear.
There were places where the song got quieter and that didn't sound quite good.
Next time when you bring new instruments in don't lower the volume of the previous elements.
It sounds unplesant.
(Rythm and sound design)
A lot of mixing problems.
Better luck with your future songs. :3
thank you i'll try my best next time
You have a long way to go...
There wasn't enough sub under the basses.
The calm arp works for the beginning and break but not the drop.
The build up didn't build up enough tension.
Used too much stock FL Studio sounds.
The sounds didn't seem to fit together.
Better lick pn your future music. :3
This is an old song xD I've mentioned that and I'm learning as well, but thanks for the feedback :)
I pretty much decided to post this today because I had nothing else to post and I want to stay active, and yeah, I know it sucks xD I have a Dark, Ambient Dubstep Track on the way and I'm putting more work into it than my usual track (Which is good, but not good for the before tracks at the same time, but I'm getting there :P)
(And also, all of the sounds in this I made myself besides the percussion, SFX, and Vox :/ I never used any default sounds besides those, I just checked)
The same melody goes on for way too long.
Too much high end.
Kicks are too quiet.
The hihats and cymbals are too loud.
8-bit snares don't seem to fit this song.
Some mixing problems and it drags on for too long.
Much luck to your future music. :3
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