The beginning was cool but there seemed to be a little bit more delay in the right ear.
There were places where the song got quieter and that didn't sound quite good.
Next time when you bring new instruments in don't lower the volume of the previous elements.
It sounds unplesant.
(Rythm and sound design)
A lot of mixing problems.
Better luck with your future songs. :3
thank you i'll try my best next time
You have a long way to go...
There wasn't enough sub under the basses.
The calm arp works for the beginning and break but not the drop.
The build up didn't build up enough tension.
Used too much stock FL Studio sounds.
The sounds didn't seem to fit together.
Better lick pn your future music. :3
This is an old song xD I've mentioned that and I'm learning as well, but thanks for the feedback :)
I pretty much decided to post this today because I had nothing else to post and I want to stay active, and yeah, I know it sucks xD I have a Dark, Ambient Dubstep Track on the way and I'm putting more work into it than my usual track (Which is good, but not good for the before tracks at the same time, but I'm getting there :P)
(And also, all of the sounds in this I made myself besides the percussion, SFX, and Vox :/ I never used any default sounds besides those, I just checked)
The same melody goes on for way too long.
Too much high end.
Kicks are too quiet.
The hihats and cymbals are too loud.
8-bit snares don't seem to fit this song.
Some mixing problems and it drags on for too long.
Much luck to your future music. :3
The main synth is waaaaaaaaaay too loud.
I know, it's because of the problem I explain in the description.
I don't get it.
The bass is too loud and the drums are too quiet.
If you would fix those two mixing problems it would be a cool loop.
It sounds like a menu screen/character select backround music.
Cool stuff... :3
The rythm stays too similar throughout the song and it gets very boring very fast.
All the drops are way too similar.
The buildups are really bland and didn't build up much suspense.
The sound design is bland and it doesn't help that it doesn't change throughout the song in any way.
The snare is a little too quiet.
And next time make a song that lasts for one or two minutes not six.
The repetition ruined anything good in the song.
The mixing is fine for the most part.
Gets boring really fast.
And drags on way too long.
Better luck with your future music...
awh, ok. thanks i'll take that into consideration
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