KrattKing's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Adaptation]

The kick isn't loud enough.
The melody starts to get boring and the main synth gets annoying.
In later tracks try to have more different synths.
The drop was too similar to the rest of the song.
When the song ends with reverb try not to end it when the reverb isn't all the way gone.

Much luck to your future songs. :3

LeviathanGames responds:

Thank you for all of that advice, I'll try to keep all of this in mind when I make my next song. :P

[first dungeon]

None of the elements seem to fit together.
And the silent parts seem jarring.
The bass seems a little muddy.
And there in no "drama or tension".
:3
And the ending seems to come out of nowhere.
There seems to be no focus and random stuff just happenes.

Best of luck on improving in the future.

solarplexus12 responds:

hokay mango

[On Center]

The melody got boring pretty fast.
And it got louder and quieter at random.
There were a copule times the beat skips and there were some holes in the song.
When the second synth came in that was a little jarring.
The end was defenitly better than the beginning.

Much luck to your future songs.
I hope you improve. :3

Bird25 responds:

Thanks for the constructive criticism. The second point seems to be a glitch in the program I use, other than that I'll work on it. WAIT... just realized that it didn't upload correctly. The melody has a delay effect that did not process. I may re-upload this.

[Uncertain]

A cool song but the mixing is off.
The drums are too quiet and the build up is absolutely the worst part of the track.
The piano and the chords are too loud.

Better luck in the future :3

Kolct responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I pretty much had no idea what I was doing, will consult my friend who gifted me the program about some core features in the future! Will definitely take this to heart, though! Thanks!

[Synthesize Me (V1)]

The high end was too loud.
The fast bass arp thing got annoying real fast.
The melodys were cool and jazzy.
The Kick was way too quiet during the drop.
both of the drums were too quiet.

A cool beat and melody but it has a lot of mixing problems.

If you manage to fix all of these problems this would be a cool ass song. :3

ConnorGrail responds:

Thanks for the solid feedback!

[The Supermoon]

A good song.
But WAY too generic.

The mixing and mastering is ok.
The melodys are generic as well the sound design.
Some of the parts were actually pretty cool.

:3

KiwiFruitGamerOnline responds:

Thanks :D Glad You Love it

[Red Moon]

Something went wrong with the mixing before and after the drops.
Maybe something with the sidechain?
The drops themselves were fine.
The melody and sound design sounds way too generic.
And a white noise fade out is a boring way to stop a song.

Better luck in the future :3

DaylightEDM responds:

ok thanks :)

[Sejja - Bright Nightmares]

The bass felt kinda weak and weird.
The drop gets repetitive very fast.
The drums didn"t have enough punch.
When the piano started playing on top of the bass that sounded horrible.

SejjaMysteryman responds:

I understand that maybe you don´t like the song, but please, be respectful

[Awaken]

Feels like on some parts there is too little happening.
And some sounds don"t seem to fit.
The drums were a little quiet.
The beginning sounded realy cool but it kinda lost its charm when it came back the second time.
The hi hats were good.
The chords were a little too loud so it was hard to hear the melody.

Dubstellation responds:

Yeah, it's harder to mix when your headphone jack is broken on your laptop, haha! I'll be trying to get USB Headphones so I can learn to mix properly :)

[Jacked]

The sounds a are a bit basic.
I don´t belive this is considered DnB.
The beat is a bit repetitive.
The structure is weird and it feels like parts of the song happen randomly.
The rest of the song is too quiet compared to the drop.

GeometryDashZelto responds:

it my first song.