Better.
But it still feels kinda awkward.
The high freq bass sound before the drop sounded distracting.
Pre drop was pretty good but it kinda fell apart at the drop.
Better.
But it still feels kinda awkward.
The high freq bass sound before the drop sounded distracting.
Pre drop was pretty good but it kinda fell apart at the drop.
Thanks dude!
Also, I subbed to your youtube channel because you deserve it!
The drums in the drop aren't loud enough and the drop doesn't have a rythm or flow.
Some of the bass sounds have no sub.
The first and second drop are way too similar.
The build up could have had a rise/sweep.
The best part of the track is the cool spacey atmophere. :3
Good luck with the tracks you make in the future.
I know that drop doesn`t follow any specific rythm patterns.
I was aiming for that odd feeling what Xtrullor has made with his tracks. Well as i see it didnt work out that well, but this track was there to experiment things (basses, melodies, mixing etc.)
But thanks for feedback :-)
apreciate it ;3;
Mabye put a short amount of reverb on the bass so it feels more full. I'm not a music theory expert but it feels like the chords are off key.
Good luck with later songs you make.
thanks man
The weird bass sound is way too loud and distracting and dosen´t have enough bass.
The melody volume was way too low.
The build up doesn´t have a first half.
The drop is anti climatic and disappointing.
Mixing is a little off.
The melody is a bit on the generic side but thats fine.
And yes as you put in the tags this is electro house and not dubstep.
+the cover photo makes my eyes bleed. (But thats a nit-pick)
contrary to your title there is a thing to regret.
And its mad mixing.
For a good electro house track, have a listen to:
Mord Fustang - Misguided Freshman
And to hear what a dubstep track sound like check out my:
KrattKing - Kingdom of Bass
Hope you get better in the future. :3
Let's hope the rest of the world likes it!
OK...
The start of your track ended way too quickly and there was no build up to the drop.
And holy shit my ears.
You have to bring the high end down so much.
Some parts of the songs were actualy painful to listen to.
And the bass sounds weak and has no real flow.
Good luck in the future and try to keep this review in mind. :D
It was a good song but there were 4 things you did wrong:
1) The sound desing was bland but the lovely melody made up for it.
so it isnt much of a point.
2) The bass sounded weak and flimsy.
3) The lyrics were bland as fuck. I would recomend not using lyrics at all except if you recorded and wrote them.
4) Try to hold back on the high end. (The FX´s and hi hats)
Try to always keep the high end in the back of the song. If the high end is sa loud or louder than the rest of the track it becomes painful at high volumes.
Hope you learn a copule things from this review.
Good luck on your later songs. :3
Thanks for the review I will try to make my songs better in the future.
I think that the start of the song sets up this feeling that the drop will be heavy, and the great crisp sound desing before the drop feels like its setting up for a great powerful drop.
But when the drop happenes its disappointing.
Other than that the mixing and atmosphere is fucking beautiful.
I hope you improve with your later songs. :3
Thanks for the critique. I personally feel like "big drops" are subjective. It's what you're looking for in the track and how the artist wants the audience to experience it. I try not to rely on drops to make or break the track and instead focus on developing a new sound and experience. So maybe the drop is anti-climactic, but that's no the focus.
Its always good to try new things.
But this sound like random notes.
I know right? What was I thinking... i just finished it here: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/714540
This song is not made by you.
I uploaded it to be able to use it in geometry dash, but it is not mine
Horrible mixing.
bad sound desing.
Boring and bland.
high hats are way too loud.
That's great, you heard the early demo version yes I'll admit the mixing ain't great but I'm doing this on a tv hooked to a computer so I can't use headphones. Also I'm baked out of my tree and putting minimal effort as I haven't doe this in years. Check out http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/714353
I draw mostly cutesy stuff.
And once in a while make some music.
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