After 1:15 there is a long silence that you should probably just cut out.
This has a chill and oldschool sorta vibe, which is relaxing and very peaceful.
But the absolute biggest problem with this track as a whole is that its too quiet. This could be solved with either turning up the master or putting a compressor on the master and then cranking that up. Most music is mixed to 0db, this track is far below 0db.
Best of luck with your furure music and I hope you'll find a way to fix it!